In clay from ancient times,
our tread has deepened, faded,
graded its declines, those patterns of our gait
translate the size and height, our stance.
We rise to walk upright,
seize weapons of the hand and mind,
our troubles multiply,
our brains try hard to understand.
Have we, do we e'er progress?
We think it so; we know;
and still we make the same mistakes
that man made eons ago.
Comments
hello
Well asked question...............stan
Would love to offer a critique...
... but this poem needs no help. Poignant and lovely to "listen" to. wesley
Coming from you Wesley, thank you,
Coming from you Wesley, thank you,
I know you prize the sound of a poem;
as when I read your poems that aspect
appears so very important.
The music of language,
the lilt, the tilt, the silt
eroded through the years,
encoded in our minds,
replayed again, again,
an ever changing game.
Ann.