Procreation a recreation of antiquity
micro populations confined by geographic boundaries,
spider webbing across the naked planet.
Verdant green sprouting, carpeting the stratum
Vegan life plan, wildlife annihilated ,
Adam’s Ale, liquid restrained.
Volcanic shudders, earth quakes threaten
Seismic clash, fissures appear
Imperceptible crash
Azure skies flood with ebony
Eruptions , oozing terror
Snuffing out life
End of Days
End of this world
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Sounds,
Sounds terrifying, but sounds so much like it could be for us if we don't slow down. Frightfully good. Love Roscooe..
Roscoe
thank you
Lou
This last one went a little over my head.
You mentioned once that you're considering expanding this a little through a story. Any truth to that? I would read. wesley
Wesley
i may write a short story, not sure if I could expand it into a book.
I'm glad that you like it.
Lou
...And a Happy New year to you too!
What I like about this piece is how you used words to paint a chaotic picture in my mind. There didn't seem to be any central flow of thought; just descriptions of images all related to an End of World scenario.
I was quite a read, though I wish there were more to it. Much more to it.
Well
this poem is the last of a series of poems, to get the point one must read the others.
Lou
Thanks for the tip
Thanks for the tip