A Little Humor In Writing

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Humor in Writing Workshop 2- Vampire

There was a vamp who did bite
All the ladies took fright
His speed was such
He didn’t move too much
But fell on a spike from a height

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

Region, Country: West London, GBR

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda

you really need to read them aloud.
Hear the difference

There was a vamp who did bite
the ladies took a big fright
His speed was such
He didn’t move much
But fell on a spike from a height

lines 1,2 and 5 scan the same, 3 and 4 are shorter.
cool getting a half rhyme in the last line