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Oct 29, 2011

Your Admiration

Your Admiration

Is only because
your brain is so wired,
Despite your ailment
You are bright
While others not ill,
Are so much without
Depth, love and insight

Coz our brains are integrated
And
Cast at birth
While in the womb
And
The mom knows not
what she is thinking,
Of the loveliest new arrival
or the tomb

And

Her thoughts get transplanted
In our infant,
yet to be born ,
developing mind
Where can then ,anyone these two
Identical kind of brains ever find.

You remind me of a lost brother
And
So I hope you are one

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Country/Region: ROU

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Comments

faithmairee

I've missed you terribly! I enjoyed your thought-provoking poem so much. It's great!

Love-Faith