Roscoe Lane
Roscoe Lane
Oct 13, 2011

Rain of Songs

Rain Of songs..

What force is this that carries a
heart’s intentions into uncertain moments?
could a lover’s attention ever waver afore
a persons unkind comments?. I say in this
state the heart does not stutter but surges
forth scattering all such thoughts of speech
amid the clutter for on this journey there
is a rain of songs and the true heart can
be lifted by notes to heights,
where it belongs..

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Region, Country: Scotland, Ayrshire land of Burns.., GBR

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