There was a girl called Fanny
She looked the Hulk it’s uncanny
Bellowed and blew
Made a hullabaloo
Then turned back into Fanny
Oct 12, 2011
Humor in writing workshop 4 - Fanny
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Dear Lou,
Cute! Good Luck with this workshop.
always, Cat
Just one little crit...
The last line doesn't have enough syllables. As to the humor, I see that right away, and you also wrote a limerick! love ya, ~ Gee