Predator Stalking your prey
hint of a grin creeping out,
from the corners of your mouth.
You are a sinner and I am the sin
Licking lips in anticipation
closing in by increments
Circling me then backing away
Establishing your territory.
Pressing against me
Your gender is apparent
Your breathe upon my neck.
Sweet heart failure,
I offer my self up
to your tender mercy,
Yours to do with
What you will.
Savagery untamed,
Passion spent you slip away.
Carcass ravaged upon the floor
Bones picked clean.
Comments
Dear Lou,
I really loved this piece and went into more detail elsewhere. You've outdone yourself here! Cannot pick out favorite lines as all are delicious!
always, Cat
Cat
thank you
love lou
Phew.
I'm such a prude. This is a little too racy for me, but perhaps that says something of the poem in itself. wesley
Wesley
maybe i should have a warning.
lou
hi
thanks
lou
hi
thank you
lou
Jayne
Thank you I'm pleased that you like it.
Lou
Jayne
i'm not sure what the reason for the improvement, the work shops certainy focus you.
thank you for saying so.
love lou