They call him the naked biker
he streaks from town to town,
teasing all the ladies with his manly frame.
When you hear the engine of a vintage motorbike roar
you can be sure that he is on his way.
So lock up your daughters, cover your eyes today
You have to hope he won't dismount,
and give you the full show.
With his friend John Thomas he might terrorise the town.
They call him the naked biker
He flaunts his butt cheeks far and wide
He's such an exhibitionist you have to run and hide.
Comments
the naked biker rides
the naked biker rides
his flag is waving in the breeze
and I wonder where his allegiance is
when he stands at attention.
;-)
~A
Dear Lou,
I couldn't help but chuckle the second time I read this!
always, Cat
Cat
thank you
love lou
Lou
thought i might have fun with your poem from a male view. i hope you don"t mind. this is what i came up with. I'm not suggesting any changes as your is really good.
She’s called the naked biker
flashing from town to town,
teasing men with her feminine frame.
When you hear the engine of a raw, vintage, motorcycle
be certain she’s coming, so
lock up your son, cover your eyes
Hope she doesn’t descend
giving her full show with friend Peggy Sue, because
she might terrorize the town.
She’s called the naked biker
who flaunts her tits far and wide
a grand diva, run and hide.
Barbara
Nice job
Why don't you come up with a poem yourself.
Lou
Lou
i really was just sharing how i thought you poem should in my mind. it was easier to do it this way, rather than try expressing it in normal critique. my mind switch gears on me a lot so i simply go with the flow that it fun.
Barbara
No problem, I wasn't offended.
Lou
happy to hear that
i have an extremely sensitive conscience that beats me to a pulp lol
I love it!...
That should warn those townspeople! It would have been better with the picture! LOL Great fun, Lou. ~ Gee
Gee
I'm glad that you are not offended , love ya loads
Lou
Jayne
Glad that you liked it.
lou
That naked biker is??
Hmmm now who could this possibly be Lou? I like it and the picture that comes to mind wow what a show the biker gives to all at the parade. lol
Sorry to have missed your chat. Let me know next time okay when you will be hosting the chatting room. Best of wishes also in your new job assignments.
That naked biker is that Geez? Lord knows I will have to interrogate him in the chat room. On the darkside riding a bike stark naked. Hmmmm some daring devil if it is him. Smiles for miles:)
Great day to you Lou
Mona
xox
Mona
I can't possibly tell you who the naked biker is, he will tell you i'm sure. LOL!!
Look forward to seeing you at next chat.
Lou
You think
he or she will? lol
Rip Roaring Fun!
Great write which made me laugh! Even reminded me of some wild times...........
Lenny
the mind boggles, do tell LOL!!!!
thanks
Lou
LOVE IT!!!
OMG i like it!!! It gave me an image in my mind like no other poem has, wow i want to see more like this!!!!!!!!!!!.
When reading
When reading your poem i had this image in my head of Tom Seleck getting off of a harely and showing his best friend to the world LOL .
Nicole
this was written as a joke between friends, I'm sure he would be most flattered to be compared to Tom Selleck .
Lou