raj
Sep 11, 2011

couplet

wounds heal, leaving scars
like morbid stones on greens

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

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Comments

R

thank you Lonnie for the read and appreciative comment..it is my maiden attempt to express a thought as concisely as possible allowing the reader to expand on those lines as perceived by them and deemed fit....hence i coined this style as a twinket though there may not be such poetry form...lol..

R

thank you for the read and appreciative comment..means a lot while i try to come back from a block...

S

leave it to you to think Haiku are too wordy lmao. This reads like the final two lines of a fine poem.........stan

R

this is my maiden attempt to explore the possibility of expressing more in fewer lines...i am going to try out some more ...

R

thank you for the read and your appreciative comment...i am attempting to write more of these short ones...most have commented that they would like this to be expanded but i think it would be nice to provide this as a stimulant and let the readers expand on the theme the way they perceive it...

much love...

M

I was thining this was a Haiku but then again no. I like how it stands alone. Little lines big meanings. Good job friend

Mona

loved

loved

13 years 6 months ago

like Subhash Chandra Bose in his IAS exam wrote

DIVIDE AND RULE .

AND CONVEYED VOLUMES ....
SO DO YOU WITH SILENCE!
RAJ UR UNIQUE...

loved

loved

13 years 6 months ago

Only great people
are humble like you
and I,
that's why along the sea beaches
we roll and the surfs pass by ...

But then some one looks back
and says
Wasn't he
HE?
Yeah that's
All about life aint it.