lou
lou
Sep 08, 2011
This poem is part of the workshop:

Writing With Emotions

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Verbal leakage writing with emotions workshop Re-write

Bullshit, verbal leakage,     
you are putrid seepage,
dripping down my mind.

Your a waste, a product of filth
a perverted fornicater
a grubby little gob shite of the worst kind

Bullshit verbal leakage
every time I see you
I feel the need to lobotomise
and lose my tiny mind.

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: West London, GBR

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda

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Comments

lou

lou

13 years 7 months ago

I'm glad that you think so LOL!!

Lou

lou

lou

13 years 7 months ago

LOL!! Well it is a hate poem.

lou

R

raj

13 years 7 months ago

whosoever is at the receiving end of this ..BEWARE and ...stay outta the way of Lou,....

fun apart..this is powerfully hateful...

R

raj

13 years 7 months ago

Andrew thank you for getting the button for worjshop critique which hitherto was missing from my page..Lou thank you for referring this snag to Andrew...