Stain
Hemlock creeping through my veins.
Limbs numb by degrees .
But my ability to live remains.
Losing everything slashing imperceptibly
no visible mark, or contusions.
successive illusions.
Mental strain unapparent
Internalized, coiled within my guts
Holding on so as not to cause pain
Can't fool or hide from myself,
but no one else can detect
that I am eviscerated.
Comments
Xena
Your wee brain did very well LOL !!!
The poem refers to the mental strain caused by medical issues. Glad you liked it. Note to self, must cheer up LMAO !!
Lou
This touched me deeply.
I believe I know where you are coming from.
Well constructed free verse and an awesome ending
Jess
Thank you.
Lou