Ink Artist
Ink Artist
Aug 15, 2011

~beatification

before me, there were trees

rocks and rain
and stars

with the passing of time
I have learned
to tie my days with the red thread
of sunrise
to dip my fingers in spring-cold water
of wisdom
to watch as warm wind visits
my window

outside my pane
a hundred smiles
are born from the strength
of just one vine

this life is
too brief a journey

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: USA

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda

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Comments

Eduardo Cruz

This is Taoism at its best!
a combination of a written out Haiku.
I love the way you structure this. the meter builds in a soft but strong way.
excellent!!
Eddie

PS i am a Taoist.

Candlewitch

there are beautiful thoughts and sentiments here. Life lessons if one reads carefully! Very well done!!!

always, Cat