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Aug 09, 2011

Remember Me

Decades have lapsed,
Down memory lane,
Do remember me
When I’m gone,
The sojourn was fraught
With love,
Lost loneliness
Yet twas worth our style
Remember me when I’m gone,
Twill be worth your while…

Memories sure are interminable
Love has always so been,
The finale is a matter ordained,
Come hold me,
Remember me for my good
Bad
Also
When we were happy
And sad

For times a fleeting passing phase,
Only memories do for ever remain,
In this brief life’s domain

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Country/Region: ROU

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Candlewitch

Lost loneliness
Yet twas worth our style
Remember me when I’m gone,
Twill be worth your while…

Very nicely put together!

always, Cat

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13 years 8 months ago

your encouragement
brings tears in my eyes ,
a scientist,
you all convert
into a poet
thanks, cat

S

We will never be truly gone as long as 1 person remembers us. nice poem...........stan

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13 years 8 months ago

since u had a hectic anniversary,
awayfrom us...
thank God Almighty
you return back today,
To continue to play....