In hope we live
In amazement we dwell
At which cross roads of life,
We shall meet,
no one can tell,
But we continue to hope
With our desires
limitations we have to cope.
Meet,
perhaps we shall never,
But friends,
We shall be for ever.
Hopefully...
No!
Aug 09, 2011
Hopefully Polite edit......
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Dear Loved,
Very nicely stated! Favorite lines:
In amazement we dwell
At which cross roads of life,
We shall meet,
none can tell,
But we continue to hope
always, Cat
thanks Cat
for ur continued support,
to which i have always looked forward to
thanks again ,
glad you come by
Please do more often
Loved
nicely crafted piece this is...
thank you ever so much raj
ur so kind and generous
in your contributions
thanks
kindly do walk by
more often