Innocence lost

The love once shone pure white,
now forever lost from my sight;
A moment lost, I cannot gain back,
of the carefree innocence we now lack
That hour in time eludes capture,
I go on with a wisp of that wonderful rapture.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Editing Stage: Not actively editing

About the Author

Region, Country: Michigan, USA

Favorite Poets: Songs of Solomon

Comments

ty for taking the time to

ty for taking the time to read and post your comments, I appreciate it

HI

This is a very well constructed poem.

lou

lost

welcome ! You have shown that rhyming poetry need not run on in length as so many of mine do. Well done..................scribbler

ty for taking the time to

ty for taking the time to read... appreciate it

Innocence Lost

Patty, was missing you. Glad to see you back, wonderful poem!

thanks Jan

Sweet Patty

Yes, that marvelous innocents, and now there so much truth in all we see that all we can do is hold on to things that first made us happy. not when youg but when we learn the truth of how we could servive it all.
Living always in that moment.
thanks for posting this peice of peace!
Fast Eddie Esq.

Hi all

Its good to be back and to see everyone, so to speak. This has been in the closet of my computer for a long time waiting for neo to come back. And it did, And you're all here,
there is no place like home......Ha Ha Love you all....