Secret...

Be bold...
Let the world know how you feel
Be scared...
You don't know how it will turn out
Dream...
Fantasy is often better than the reality
Do...
What are the consequences?
Question...
The madness of your thoughts
Share...
And be revealed

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
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Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: New York State - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Poe

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Comments

Dear Sir Gee,

This is good advice for anyone!

p.s.

I miss Jayne (seren)

always, Cat

Thanks Cat...

I didn't mean it as advice, at least not to anyone else. It was intended as a reflective piece. However, I do see now that it might be good advice. I wonder about the things I do and the ways that they might impact others. Sometimes I worry about being selfish. I miss her too! ~ Love ya, ~ Gee