Barbara Writes
Barbara Writes
Jul 24, 2011

A Pot of Stew

A pot of stew for you to chew
includes a boot to kick ur a^^
Not enough knives, for ur demise
And a hand full of nails,
to impale ur behind

Getting into my head
Was not ingenious
Playing games for ur sick aim
Only stirred my beast within
Unleashed my wrath from the abyss
Now this pot of stew I'm brewing
Is just for you 

A brilliant idea I figure
would be to include you !!!!!!!!
into the pot of stew
That's stewing just for you

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Thanks Scrib, i am not a violent person. lol just that imagining him in the stew is so brilliant lol

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - draft

About the Author

Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins

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Comments

S

Expect the addressed person is lucky to not be In the stew lol........stan

Barbara Writes

yes he is.
i am glad you stop by for a read and comment. I appreciate it.
at times children who can't see behind blind eyes fill with love, certainly can find people that make you want to hurt them. letting off a bit of steam. lol
we can't live their life for them, gotta let them make their own mistakes.

Candlewitch

Whew! This is quite a decent vent!

by the way... I love the pic of you in the pretty dress!

always, Cat

weirdelf

I've got to say I really don't like the "ur" for "your", it's not colloquialism, it's bad spelling.

And what were you thinking with that coy bullshit "a^^"?
If you're going to kick ass, kick ass!
oh and !!!!!!!! is quite un-necessary, one ! is always enough.