The loneliness inside me,
that reigns as a tomb
and the moon burning on my tongue,
ignorant and all-knowing he laughs
the years passed, the gate-keeper
of my night, what happened
with your countenance?
Jul 19, 2011
To loneliness
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
Comments
Nevel,
i feel as if we should all write to our loneliness, thank you for sharing this with us, its a haunting read that made me re read it a few times.