themoonman
themoonman
Jun 15, 2011

Slippery Slope

On the Crystal slide
anyone can ride
if your calloused enough
for the lines that follow

I'll never get my fill
and can taste it still
one look inside
other girls forgotten

Yum Yum sweet Crystal's sex
that overly addictive sticky mess
her fine red hair and creamy skin
watch out boys, my turn again

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Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

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themoonman

We are all doing ok, hope all is well there too.

yes, this has that juvenile side I can't seem to shake from ...
and hope I never do.

thanks

Bonitaj

Sorry I came late to this one. Drawn in by Philosophical Nature of the title. You didn't disappoint!
Isn't temptation, particularly of the carnal variety, nearly always a slippery slope?
Nicely captured!
Boni

loved

loved

13 years 9 months ago

if only i had followed you
on my part ,
its been blunderful

My Honour
It’s a signal honour,
Whenever you visit my leaf,
It helps me turn,
A new leaf,
In my life
Its my belief..