Spector of lost dreams rises
as she gazes at the stars in mute prayer
Virginal innocence undone
Begat from the loins of hades
Cursed, to roam this unholy earth
Soul seeker is given birth
Innocent child tainted blood
Coursing through his veins,
Murderous creature undone.
Metamorphosis into adulthood
On the cusp,
Innocence receding.
Lust broiling uncontained,
breeding the monster,
destined to be undone.
Comments
Another...
good one! Only crit. here is I would leave off the ess on [rises]. Love ya, ~ Gee
Gee
Thanks
Love lou
Brrrrr. ~A
Brrrrr.
~A
Anna
Another odd crit, what do you mean ?
Lou
Chrys
Thank you very much, it is based on a character from a book I'm writing.
Lou
Chrys
Thank you very much.
Lou