t. reflexion
t. reflexion
Jun 29, 2011

IN THE GREAT HALL

I wandered to the portals of a great hall
On the entrance arc, was carved an inscription
Depicting courage, fame, noble actions, all
Boldly written, a two line axiom of perfection
‘Peak of physical expression is in beauty’
A revolving reflective door appeared
‘The intellect expresses self in poetic bounty’
And the shadows of misguided self disappeared
The self I saw, of beauty and poetry, I had neither
I think in one language and write in another
Mother tongue doesn’t help my English either
Of iambic, rhythm and rhyme, why should I bother?
I want to say as it is, in the great hall of fame
And the echoes of truth will carry my name

About This Poem

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: NGA

Favorite Poets: Inspired by an article in an old manuscript

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Comments

Barbara Writes

wonderful wonderful I really enjoyed this poem

t. reflexion

Thank you. I will continue to write the way I see things and the best way my ability can carry. Best wishes.

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