Roscoe Lane
Roscoe Lane
Jun 25, 2011

A special peace poem...

A special peace poem

I don’t pertain the mantle of perfection,
I just love to see my words on a page.
Maybe it’s not so pleasant for others ,
keep reading it may improve with age.

Yours not mine…

To rumble around my big empty head,
with spelling and diction what i covet.
Can’t say what I write will be special,
but I can say without fear that I love it.

Hope you feel the same….

Special is a term so very often lightly used,
I’d say we’re all kind of special to someone.
So come out fighting with pen, get bruised,
if not then you’ll sure miss all the fun.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: To break someones ice, to do it in a thrice , only trying to write nice, we should not live like mice....

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Scotland, Ayrshire land of Burns.., GBR

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Comments

Barbara Writes

nice i like
to be special is to be special
but not always fun

your special is fun and way cool

Roscoe Lane

Thank you, i've been busy and have just read your profile, if you've raised four children and now back at college. You are special in my eyes, promise i'll catch up on your poetry. Love Roscoe...

wesley snow

A guy could go on a little ways picking on the meter, rhyme and inner logic, but I prefer to cut to the chase- This is a wholly delightful little poem. Just a superior piece of whimsy. Thank you.
wesley

Roscoe Lane

Thank you Wesley, i'm glad you enjoyed, sometimes it's better written as it comes out. Regards Roscoe...