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Jun 22, 2011

Lost My Horizon!

Lost My Horizon!

Here I stand watching
The setting sun submerge
Yet unknowingly emerge
Beyond the realms
Of my imagination
Can I rise once again?
I wonder
When I am at the end asunder
Time ceases to be for me,
Where then in the cauldrons’
Of fiery sunshine
where once I basked
Shall I stand?
As time does me raise
But not a shred of drop erase
that which once came in surges
Now nothing emerges
Upon the emptiness the desolate
Sands of time
I lay my entrails to be consumed
Tis my imagination
That time alone shall never resume,
Albeit how erroneous was my thought
In the power of ego
My mind was wrought
Now in the doldrums
The garbage bins of everlasting time
My remains if anyone does taste
Tis time to recycle
Oh life!
What a stupified waste.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

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13 years 10 months ago

ur a gr8healer u know who is what
frnd i read all ur comments for and against
thanks bye the way comment only
if u have something positive
no one wants to hear ur unwanted version
and damaging opinion

take care kal whatever
i don;t follow u u know it .
remove this commment quickly
urs i mean ..
ok take heed immediately
ur playing with fire
not molten lava

S

Not sure I agree that life is a waste, but the poem is a good one. Got a few ideas you might smoke over :
l-12 try where once I basked
l-16 try that which once came in surges
both might make for easier reading..............stan