Eduardo Cruz
Eduardo Cruz
Jun 20, 2011
This poem is part of the workshop:

Writing Forms workshop

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About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: New York City, N.Y. Spanish Harlem, USA

Favorite Poets: P. Neruda

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Comments

S

Nice free verse , now try it in western classic lol............stan

loved

loved

13 years 10 months ago

I dare say not,
As no work shall make you
My dear Eddie, not Jack,
A dull boy, not lad
And
If you work like Stan does,
Then Loved can't at all shirk.

So hold all hands,
In ring –a -ring roses,
Work or not to work
All ills disposes,

So work and compose,
A poem each,
On Eddie or Rose,
May be Stan,
If it does you please

and

As Lou and Barbara Whites stand by
For any emergency,
Thanks to friends,
All of thee
For reading me...

K

I won't be submitting here in free worse. ;-)
Don't know if the workshop button is working, our page looked different on the Shark pool.

~A

Eduardo Cruz

I tried also and nothing time to contact tech support

Eduardo Cruz

final test before beginning workshop of the highlight button

Eduardo Cruz

Wise arse! hahaha!
come join my workshop it will be fun to have a madman like you. well interesting to say the lease. LMAO!

Regards,
Eddie

Hooded Stranger

Hooded Stranger

13 years 10 months ago

Here's a workshop test comment

HS

Hooded Stranger

Hooded Stranger

13 years 10 months ago

Here's a non-workshop comment.

HS