itzhak bareket
Jun 05, 2011

today , yesterday , tomorrow , by: itzhak bareket .

you know , today ,
i"m not exactely the same man
that i vas yesterday .
it"s different .
i mean i am i ,
but , with some 35 . 575 yesterdays
acumulated , colected in myself , in me ,
plus today ,
that tomorrow will be
an other yesterday ,
if meanwhile i shall not leave here
and co away for ever .

all my day"s,
all my night"s ,
-the white ,the black ,the full coloured ,-
gave me a lot of oppurtunites ,
plenty chances :
I was a prince , i was a king , a vinner ,a caesar ,
a looser , a baggar ,a worker , a soldier, a fighter , a prisonier ,
and after all , free ,a so called free senior cityzien .

it's not so bad ...no reason to be sad......
tomorrow morning , i shall prepare my breakfast :
black bread to eat , water to drink .
and could be- between you and me -
that i shall fall again in love .
who knows ,every thing could be ,

copyright : itzhak bareket 2011 .

About This Poem

Last Few Words: thank you , my dear friends , for your kind attention . regards , itzhak bareket .

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

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Country/Region: ISR

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Comments

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dear Kal ,
thank you very much for your impresive remarkable lines . i didn' t try to hide myself , and the result is , that you discovered me very easy .
wishing you all the best , i start beeing your friiend ,
itzhak bareket .

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THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR KYND REVIEW AND RECOMANDATION TO READ THE BOOKS MENTIONED ABOVE .I " ll do my best to find them .
warm regards , itzhak bareket.

K

Oy vey!
all my tomorrows
are my yesterdays'
todays.

no wonder I can't find a straight man in a bale of strawmen.

~A

nice 2cu again and again if u know what i mean

are

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dear friends ,how come ?
this after noon -- local israel time ,i did post a poem ,named '' light nap "-- but to my great regret ,i do not find it .
what happened ?
PLEASE ,YOUR ANSWER.
regards , itzhak bareket .