lou
lou
Jun 02, 2011

Volatile

I'm a bitch
Jump in feet first
and think later.

Volatile witch 
quick to anger,
Curse and fight.

Someone attacks me 
they live to regret It
they will never forget it.

Filled with self loathing
Brimming with remorse,
Overflowing with regret.

Not to proud to admit
When I'm wrong,
Even when my foots in my mouth.

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: West London, GBR

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda

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Comments

K

Hey, this rolled out of your mouth like honey on a spoon. Did you mean to do that?

Don't worry (if you are), you'll grow out of this stage, I did. ;-)

~A

lou

lou

13 years 11 months ago

In reply to by xena465

I need anger management lol

Lou

M

I bet you felt good once you pressed the enter button Lou:) I know what you mean in this write of yours and it is good to get that anger out before IT sets in.

Love to you gal
Mona

lou

I do my best . I never resort to violence. Lol
This is only slightly autobiographical, I have embellished some what.

Lou

Bonitaj

Anger well captured here...
As long as you don 't take yourself too seriously all's well . . . ;)
Boni

lou

This poem was supposed to be tongue i cheek.

thanks Lou