When the clouds
Block out the sun
And your heart is
Another’s red carpet
Look into your soul
And find that smile
That makes Satan
Regret meeting you
Yea’ life will throw you
To the wolves
That is when you
Look into your heart
And find the courage
Of lions
When those around you
Trample your dreams
Don’t you shed a tear
For perfection
Is a road of many
Broken dreams
There is always that one
That leaves
Your name on
Doubting tongues
When the climb
Seems impossible
Let the power of Faith
Take you wherever you desire
Don’t give up on dreams
Cause they guide you
In a world full of broken
Promises
Comments
thank you
Chrys, thanks for the insight and your prompt response
a strong write paul
with excellent advice
one small thing -
'Don’t give up on dreams
Cause they guide you'
- 'cause' is the wrong word i think - it needs to be
because or 'cause (with the apostrophe to denote the missing letters)
i really love the second stanza
love judy
thank you
Judy, for the advice
A great one here Paul
I really liked this one from you and miss seeing you around. I know you have endured alot the last couple of months and thank you for all you do for Neo!! Missed you. Great piece of work here Paul.
Cheers, Mona
Reminiscent of a song perhaps?
Boulevard of broken dreams... Nice and upbeat, is that despite the troubles or because you've overcome them?
Cheers