Free

Uncoil, with gradual breaths
Open your eyes ,refocus,
twenty twenty vision..

Free
span the breadth
and width , expand.

Laugh, cry, scream
Let it all out.
Expose yourself to reality.

Free.
span the breadth
and width,
expand.

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

Region, Country: West London, GBR

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda

this exhortation to BE YOURSELF! Freed up to enjoy it!!
Nice one Lou!
Boni

Thanks

Lou

good write lou

did you notice your line breaks with the repeated stanza?
'span the breadth
and width , expand. '

'span the breadth
and width,
expand.'
did you mean to make them different? just me - i think it looks tidier if they're the same

love and hugs
judy
xxxx