lou
lou
Nov 20, 2010

Singular

I
Singular, alone.
A transient being ,
wandering the earth.

Connecting with some
disconnecting with others.
Assimilation of recollections.

Fated as a race to enter and exit, solo.
meanwhile waiting for the other half
of the equation..

The purpose of life is to
Forge the eternal connection.
Spiralling out only to return,
shelter from the cold.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: West London, GBR

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda

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Comments

K

Lou!

I can only follow Seren's cue.

A Bow.

~

Psyve

Psyve

14 years 5 months ago

Very beautifully expressed:

"The purpose of life is to Forge the eternal connection."

A sentiment I agree with.

Psyve

Psyve

Psyve

14 years 5 months ago

Very beautifully expressed:

"The purpose of life is to Forge the eternal connection."

A sentiment I agree with.

Psyve

lou

Thank you . im still looking .

lou

lou

lou

14 years 5 months ago

Thank you

Candlewitch

I can totally relate to this poem. I love the style in which it is written. Your words just reach in a grab me.

love, cat

lou

lou

14 years 5 months ago

Thanks I'm glad you liked it

Lou xx

M

I see in this one a great thinking verse and see your poetry is coming along great here. Miss chatting with you but I have been working alot on alot of projects so time is varied and I am happy to stop in here and read this tonite. great job Lou and hope your feeling fine:)

Love Mona
xoxoxo