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the donut shop is closed
he sits on the doorstep
and he waits
what kind of a man does that
is he slow, like dumb
or simply wise in patience and purpose
a pitiful lost soul
or deeply grounded in self-understanding
is his mind a'grumble
or in the blissful glow of anticipation
the donut shop is closed
he sits on the doorstep
and he waits
Comments
Yes!...
Excellent! I see you wondering, as I often do; What is his/her motivation? Only criticism I see, is : He sits [on] the doorstep, and I would add, and [he] waits. Great job! ~ Gee
donut
he wants what he wants when he wants it.......scribbler
Is this a poem about Homer
Is this a poem about Homer Simpson?
Just kidding, you had me with the title.
~A