FOREVER FAREWELL

think I have ever commented on anything you have written before, but something drew me to this one. I saw the breaking up of a couple, and the doubt and feeling of loss. Nice work! ~ Gee

Now past colourful secrets bleed -
Into a created canvas
of new meaning
A still-life of love lost,
A portraiture of forever leavings...

How can I tell you how brilliant this piece is? It completely covers the feelings of a parting between lovers, or friends! Short but powerful. I wouldn't change a word of it.

always, Cat

Oh what a canvas of feelings
a farewell made visible and bleak,
reddened by the blood of tears and sadness
in the empty silence of the sky.

We know, we who have experienced this loss,
when we would it were otherwise.

Well expressed bonitaj, Bonny, love from Ann.

I like the feel and flow of this. Small lines..great meanings. Sums it up to a very good write in my opinion.

Blessings gal
Mona