Traditionally I think this is a Senryu as it holds reference to a person rather than a Haiku that is nature personified. But even in that, this is a lovely smile.
Yes, Senyru.....I use Haiku as the prime set , ( senyru as a subset )... for those less esoteric than yourself!
Is my elitism showing? I shall stop this practice immediately! haiku for haiku, senyru for senyru, from now on when clearly discernible.
Traditionally I think this is
Traditionally I think this is a Senryu as it holds reference to a person rather than a Haiku that is nature personified. But even in that, this is a lovely smile.
Yes, Senyru.....I use Haiku
Yes, Senyru.....I use Haiku as the prime set , ( senyru as a subset )... for those less esoteric than yourself!
Is my elitism showing? I shall stop this practice immediately! haiku for haiku, senyru for senyru, from now on when clearly discernible.
your visits are always enjoyable
sincerely
Hi Al
Another good one, I love the image here, so vivid and intense.
Senryu...haiku...lol just call it "japan-esque"!
I like it "Japan-esque"
I like it "Japan-esque" works for me...and thanks for the life affirming compliment