haiku II

" The universe can,
influence impact on life.
Stand there and watch it"

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Not actively editing

About the Author

Region, Country: New York City, N.Y. Spanish Harlem, USA

Favorite Poets: P. Neruda

Comments

Rosi

That's the idea, people forget to look. My lady (Jonette) and l always go for walks and gaze at the marvel of the universe. it's a beautiful thing for me that she enjoys it as much as I.
so go enjoy and make it a habit so as to not forget, we are but specks
Thank you sweetie

Hi Eddie

Alot said in a few words! We just need to stand and watch sometimes.

Thanks for sharing.

Love Mand xxxxxx

mand

thanks for stopping by and your comment

hello Eddie

You know old tinker just can't help but give folks alternatives lol.L-2 try: influence and impact life, to see if it fits your intent. Damn, can't even do a Haiku without scribbler sticking his nose in...............stan

Stan

NOOO!
hahaha!
I like your idea alot, but i won't do it. hard headed sometimes.
thank you stan i always appreciate your help.

universal stars

universal stars
bide time on earth until we
enter the darkness

Your haiku more than contemplates our place in it all. Nice job.

Chez

I bow in thank you!

Brilliant Ed

I think you excel in this style. I really like this, such short words..powerful message

Bravo Maestro Ed

Mona
xox

haiku II

About This Poem

About the Author

Comments

Rosi

Hi Eddie

mand

hello Eddie

Stan

universal stars

Chez

Brilliant Ed

Mona

If i may add

Hey you!

Hi Eddie

Raj