haiku III

The stars are the eyes,
the universe is watching
While you watch it move

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Not actively editing

Region, Country: New York City, N.Y. Spanish Harlem, USA

Favorite Poets: P. Neruda

Another good one.

Love Mand xxxxx

Thank you so much! ooooo

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17 syllaibles it's that easy.
the charchters must reflex the end thought