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Apr 09, 2011

Stainless Love

Stainless Love

I have no doubt
That you were sleeping
As those words rolled out
Neither the sun had set,
Nor were you dreaming.

Perhaps twas early morn by then,
Rise my friend
Above,
The soiled sheets of pain,
Love is the only beauty, in life
That does never at all stain

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Country/Region: ROU

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Comments

S

short sweet and to the point.................scribbler

loved

hope alls well with the world
and uuuuuuuuuuuuu
and thanks
for liking this one

Eduardo Cruz

This write is so beautiful and heart warming,
It's as if i'm seeing you for the first time.
and the mystery continues...
I know it was intented for my "little Witch" after her beautiful write.
Bravisima!!
Eddie C.