greeneyes
greeneyes
Nov 15, 2010

Gaurdian Of The Night

Watching fiercely, and glowing bright,
Mother moon, gaurdian of night.
Goddess of twilight,she protects so well,
There to defend, where dark things dwell.

She catches nightmares,with the power of love
Sweeps them away on the wings of a dove,
Do not fear night, for she is the queen,
Glowing in the sky, proud to be seen.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Country/Region: Colorado Springs Colorado

Favorite Poets: I love Dr. Suess! He is my favorite

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Comments

S

Welcome back ! Good to see you arrive with this wonderful concise poem.......scribbler

Hooded Stranger

Hooded Stranger

14 years 5 months ago

Here in the UK we spell 'Guardian' like that!

You have captured a great topic here, I personally see the night as evil but you have turned that idea upside down and brought a super poem.

Welcome back my dear friend.

HS

Race_9togo

It is good to see you back. Welcome.
The rhyme here is wonderful. I love the subject, and the cadence is awesome, a thing I find so difficult to do well, with rhyme.
The only criticism I have...is that you were not invited back sooner.

loved

loved

14 years 5 months ago

as i sang the peoemic song,
my eyes went with the waves along
and at every corner of my eye
i saw geen eyes
so shy.
wow just poetry tis
at times i wonder
how i miss
and
how still so many
read me after reading yours
i just can't imagine it.
whose on all fours
on the dancing floors.

loved

loved

14 years 5 months ago

Poetic Song!

As I sang the peoemic song,
Ah! My eyes went
With the waves along
And
At every corner of my eye
I saw Green eyes
So naively shy

Wow just poetry tis
At times I wonder
How I miss
And
How still so many
Read mine
After reading yours
I just can't imagine
Who’s on all fours?
On the wooden
Dancing floors?

greeneyes

Its so good to hear from everyone. Dan I would love to say that spelling was on purpose because I love all things UK, but it wasn't! LOL

Hooded Stranger

Elizabeth,

I have promised to buy Ziggy & Lou a dictionary as they are atrocious (I hope I spelt that right!) at spelling...looks like you need one too!!

Lol!

take care,

love,

HS