crypticbard
Apr 03, 2011

Crocus Buds

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crocus buds burst forth
peep and poke through dunes of white
winter bows to spring

when the sun begins to shine again
life's vital truths made clear at road's end

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About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: AUS

Favorite Poets: There is nothing quite as boring as a life completely devoid of shadows.

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Comments

Eduardo Cruz

there is nothing like a fresh start in life.
an there is no better metaphor than the seasons
I like this short and to the point write
respect to you!
Eddie

C

sorry for the late response. I have been struggling to recuperate from a rather tedious bout with the flu. Obviously a new strain has reared its head this season. The autumn over here has graced us with inclement weather.

S

This short write with Haiku start works well..................stan