THE EAGLE HAS LANDED

needs more work

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Tip of Southern Africa, ZAF

Favorite Poets: Too many to narrow down

Comments

hello

what an abbreviated write on the need to put more effort into our lives.................lmao...........stan

okay lol

He must have got up and flown away before I got here :P

It's as if you read into my mind! So intrigued that this touched everyone so. Just done a 19hr flight across the Atlantic from South Africa to D.C. and that's why this piece was conceptualized. Walked into an internet cafe at the aiport and posted it - then thought the better of it!
The rest as they say...
is history!
Really touched to hear from you all. Now go and read EE (Emotional Expression) my latest post and see if that throws any lights on what preceeded this!
Boni
ps. quite fun playing this Sherlock Holmes thing - even though it's not at all what I intended originally!
;)