in for reparation
Mar 26, 2011
DON'T TOUCH THE MONKEY
About This Poem
Last Few Words: This piece is based on an old folklore around picking up some vermin infested monkey that some other guy leaves in "the bar" after you;'ve befriended him - because you feel sorry for it! Don't pick up someone else's troubles! ;)
Style/Type: Free verse
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Bonnie
You are too funny with this one. Just a tweak or so here poet
Containminated with urine,
Makes faeces- like turds
Contaminated with urine
makes feces like turds
just some spellchecks - You know me. The monkey still places his tune:)
Love at ya gal and hope all is fine
Magics Mona
Ah Mona!
Love it when we agree to disagree... ;) There are two variations on the spelling. I choose the British version -
Human feces (or human faeces), also known as stool,[1] is the waste product of the human digestive system including bacteria. (cf. WIKIPEDIA)
Thanks so much for your support and comments ;)
Boni
Yes indeed
And I see what you mean sorry about that but is the word contaminated also of British version. I do not know all of the British versions so excuse me as I am unaware and thank you for getting that one straight..the monkey still plays his tune..I can not remember what the thing is called that the monkey plays and gets the tips for. Maybe you can tell me:)
Regards
Mona
No clue!
But I can visualise it - and smile! I refer to metaphorical monkeys only in my poem!! ;)
Like your sense of humour!
THanks Magics ;0
Boni