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Mar 21, 2011

Transformation of Energy

Transformation of Energy

I don't know much,
About the nuances of poetry
But one thing is for certain,
All energy is indestructible,
For ever it’s under transformation,
My minds eye
Opens your eyes
And
My poem transforms
Into a script,
Energy continues to transform,
Bit by bit...

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Country/Region: ROU

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My Minds Eye

The cortex lies in the forehead,
This is the minds third eye.
It can see,
Visualise,
Interpret,
Generate
And
All that there is in life,
This eye alone evaluates,
This is known as
The minds third eye.

C

behind the concept of 'tame'
then even in the activity of the lions
there may be transformation to be had!