tactile
angel
who lifts
above
flows
through
the water's
veins
buoyant
sprinkle away tempests
for prayers
of midnight's oasis
empathy
resides.
Feb 25, 2011
her transparent embrace
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
welcome
like the two line
and breaks
spent today giving back
and looking ahead in my loved city
"oasis" read much on bedouins
(am well read)
world is hurting now
we need empathy
as poets as people
well written concise
and made me think
thank you Whitetea
I have always loved
your poetry
not that I believe in angels,
not that I believe in angels, though I sure would like to, but I believe in your poem, White Tea,
empathy flows through our thawing veins
~A
not sure about angels, or
not sure about angels, or religion.
another lesbian love poem
thanks kalia for reading
lesbian? i think it
lesbian? i think it transcends sexuality or better, embraces. ;-)
~A