She stood like Lotus
in a brothel of abused
a stillborn Virgin
Mar 07, 2011
Fate Haiku
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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Oooooohh's & Ahhhhhhh's
Oooooohh's & Ahhhhhhh's
he released her
from his bondage,
the sky wept with fragrance
~A
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!
a droplet of tear
sparkled of her dignity
amidst the ruins
a lifetime opening
a lifetime opening
lotus blossom
blushing deep-roots
~A
dear Anna...thank you for
dear Anna...thank you for these loely poetic responses...which is inspiring...
Her devout spirit
now buoyant in renewed faith
searches for her Knight
Dearest Shirl...
thanks for your visit and comment....this was inspired by the abuse wrath upon innocent girls in the flesh trade...yes..you are right..there is a dark side to this haiku which you noticed....
much love..
Dearest Xena
thank you for your kind words of appreciation...
much love..
Dearest JayCee
good to know you liked this one...this one is an attempt to focus attention on International Women's Day on the plight of those women whose dignity and beauty are preyed upon by those in the flesh trade...
much love..