The sun was in its benefactive climb,
as was the moonscape of my dreaming.
And though I was not conscious
of the real world of the sun,
I was of all worlds.
Through the patterned
window of the universe
the sun came to my pane
and said, "arise,
I bring a beautiful day."
I came to breakfast
and found in my house momentary solitude,
and of this did I nourish the morning.
I sat to life's sparkling stream,
silent pool,
and saw the sun color the tree
In all that life has to offer...
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When, on my verse, there alighted
an endless winging:
"Wonder is boundless, nature more so,
but a momentary solitude is greater
than all the spinning things."
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That line...powerful
" I was of all worlds"
Feels like you became another being. A higher being.That was no longer corporeal ,but, another type of existence. I loved this piece
Tyro
Majestic and beautiful! Great work, one of my favorites!
neopoet ai
you honor me. over 95% of my poems gets the anser: "It is not feasible to offer feedback."
You honour us
With your words; I feel blessed for having read it.
Have a great day.
Just be awesome(you already are,just be you)
thank you kowque
for sharing how the poem moved you
Tyro
Hi Leslie
your words mean a lot to me. I am pleased you saw something in this.
Tyro