zuella
zuella
Jun 22, 2024

Lite love

He said, “let there be light”

and there you were.

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: belgium

Favorite Poets: its basic but i adore Mr Wilde and ive been reading his stuff for a long while.

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Comments

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The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem "Lite love" is concise and impactful, using only a few words to convey a profound message. The reference to "let there be light" evokes themes of creation and the power of words. The brevity of the poem leaves room for interpretation, inviting readers to reflect on the significance of the words spoken and the sudden appearance of "you." Consider expanding on the imagery or delving deeper into the emotions or implications behind the statement. Overall, this poem has the potential to spark thought and reflection in its readers.

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RoseBlack

I think I said something similar to my boyfriend. I had been in the dark for so long, I didn't think light was possible and then there he was. changed everything for me in a literal minute. Short and impactful. Well done.

Lavender

Hello, Zuella,
I echo the other comments! This let my imagination travel to wherever my heart wanted to go.
Very nice!
L