Hen pecked!

The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

This poem effectively utilizes imagery and action to create a vivid scene. The use of onomatopoeia in the first line immediately sets the tone and the setting. The narrative is clear and the progression of events is logical and easy to follow.

However, there are a few areas that could be improved. Firstly, the rhythm of the poem could be more consistent. Some lines have more syllables than others, which disrupts the flow. Consider revising the poem to have a more consistent rhythm.

Secondly, the use of the word 'dismembered' might be too graphic for some readers. While it does create a strong image, consider if this is the tone you want to set for your poem. If not, a less graphic word could be used.

Lastly, there's a small grammatical error in the line 'till it's body was gone'. 'It's' is a contraction of 'it is' or 'it has', while 'its' is the possessive form of 'it'. The correct form to use in this line would be 'its'.

Overall, this poem does a good job of creating a vivid and engaging scene. With some minor revisions, it could be even stronger.

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Such a normal event on the farm, but so beautiful when mirrored by a well writen poem.
a beautiful cameo.