Having been in love a number of times,
my past hearts live in me like wounds
that no longer need dressing.
But a very small part of me
will always be in love with the scars
of the time spent there.
May 30, 2024
Mended
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Some Journies take some time to appreciate.
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Hi Michael...
I like the title"Mended".
The theme is one that many hearts have sung and lived through.
I was hooked from the "Having been in love..."
Nicely done sir, ~ Geez.
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Always appreciate you
Always appreciate you stopping by Geez, and so true! Glad you liked this one.
Best