Poetry Month 2024 Imagine

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Just Imagine With Me ( A triolet)

Imagine Palestine free!
Imagine its land's not defiled!
Imagine me breathing its sea!
Imagine Palestine free
And its children live cheerfully!
Imagine us never having been exiled!
Imagine Palestine free!
Imagine its land's not defiled!

Yet we're winners anyways, we'll be paid back the price
We fight, we might restore our land or not- that's fine.
For we might be martyrs then win the paradise.
We're winners anyways , we'll be paid back the price
But never shall the bad guys win, never shall the mice.
For Palestine we live and die. 'We're Palestine'
We're winners anyways we'll be paid back the price
We fight, we may restore our land or not- that's fine.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: A pre-write that goes true anytime and every time

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

Favorite Poets: I favor the ones who are closer to humanity and

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Hi dear Rula

I do imagine with you. The poem has great power when read with the heart, and feeling the caring goodness in you I do read it with my heart.

Tyro

Hello dear tyro

I do appreciate it once for reading this one and twice for reading it with your heart which makes it a triple appreciation and it's never enough.
Thank you.