Forged in Fire

Out of the darkness, he pulled me
with all his strength and grace.

He swept me up and carried me
through the fire.

He tore down my walls and
Used the stones for our foundation.

His hand kisses my cheek
And wipes away the tears

He tends to my wounds
And holds me as I heal

Forged in fire
Our bond is unbreakable

Blessed am I,
For I know love in its purest form

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - draft

About the Author

Region, Country: USA - Georgia, USA

Favorite Poets: Lord Alfred Tennyson

Comments

Neopoet AI 5-29-23 version

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the AI is copping out. You do not explain the statement that you know love in its purest form, but I think that it hardly matters.
It paints a picture of someone supremely happy with the relationship. ~ Geezer.
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Thank you..

Very much, Geezer. I can't see any response from AI on my end, so if it said something about my last line... well, it's news to me. Lol!

The lack...

of response is what I am speaking of. It says that it does not seem feasible to offer feedback. ~ Geez.
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Hi Kristen!

Beautiful work once again! What a brilliant description of love! I'm so happy you are able to experience a relationship so strong and wonderful.
Best,
MM

Thank you...

So much, MM!