Mark
Mark
Apr 21, 2024
This poem is part of the contest:

Poetry Month 2024 Imagine

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Imagine

Imagine there is heaven,
Consciousness of a feeling,
Euphoria that cannot be found,
Whilst we live attached to our ground.

Grounded only in truth,
Or lies that grow from false reality,
Spawned by temporary enlightenment,
What grows to ingest by you and me.

A taste of imagine,
The hurt of permanent transcendence,
Or slowing to stop then move on,
Imagine there is heaven.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Moody Street, USA

Favorite Poets: Black Mountain

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Comments

zuella

This hit me really hard, the first line really drew me in because I actually tried clicking out of the website and then I just couldn’t until I finished it and I’m really glad I did. I loved the way I could picture everything without there being much intentional imagery. I really liked this! Keep it up

-zuella

Mark

Thank youfor your kind comment and time spent reading. When I was finished with it as is the first thing I was aware of was the lack of imagery. So I decided to post it and see what sort ofcomment it brought especially on imagery.
You made my day!
Mark