"Are you reading a book?", asked Piglet.
"In a way.", said Pooh. "It's my diary. I fill it with poetry."
"Am I in it?", asked Piglet.
"Yes you are.", said Pooh with a smile.
"My friends and family are my favorite chapters."
Apr 11, 2024
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About This Poem
Last Few Words: A little bit of whimsy that might be a little deeper than a first glance might suggest.
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Your title is great...
I like the theme, as it does indeed, seem to be deeper than is first apparent.
The beginning was a scenario that leads to the whole of the tale, and ultimately, the fitting end.
Very nicely done, with a familiar fantasy family. ~ Geez.
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Yes! I've kept a journal / diary since 2010. Each day I read the entries for the date - full of my favorite chapters!
Love the title and the endearing exchange.
Thank you!
L
How I Love
these stories. I still have a couple of well thumbed copies and sometimes, late at night, they come off the shelf. My favourite, 'In search of a Heffalump'. My favourite character. Alexander Beetle.